BOSS 1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My current boss is totally different from my preivous boss.
My previsous boss was old, over 53years. He was a conservative person and majored in Korea history. Even though he was very nice, but, he was strict and had his own rule. It was a little bit hard to accept his order when it was not reasonable.
On the other hand, my current boss is very young, around middle of 40tys. He is a progressive person and majored in Hotel management in the U.S.. He has very reasonable thoughts and try to encourage us. So, frankly speaking, I prefer working with my current boss for work.
My previsous boss was old, over 53years. He was a conservative person and majored in Korea history. Even though he was very nice, but, he was strict and had his own rule. It was a little bit hard to accept his order when it was not reasonable.
On the other hand, my current boss is very young, around middle of 40tys. He is a progressive person and majored in Hotel management in the U.S.. He has very reasonable thoughts and try to encourage us. So, frankly speaking, I prefer working with my current boss for work.
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