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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 11. 04 조회 10483

2020-11-04

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Up to now, when I had an endoscopy, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during an endoscopy.
Up to now, when I underwent endoscopies, I didn't take sedatives. I was always awake during endoscopies.
Up to now, when I underwent endoscopies, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during endoscopy.

I divided the annual interest by 12.
튜터 교정 답변

            Up to now, when I had an endoscopy, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during an endoscopy.
Up to now, when I underwent endoscopies, I didn't take sedatives. I was always awake during endoscopies.
Up to now, when I underwent endoscopies, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during endoscopy.

I divided the annual interest by 12.     ******

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