2020-11-05 (1)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Order: This case doesn't constitute Workplace harassment
Reason:
- It is confirmed that the shift of workplace, seizure and inspection of computer, changed duty etc. have been proceeded under the prior approval from the Principal and the Bursar.
- It was recommended to use English for not only Donghoon Kim but also staffs and students. Also, the the staffs have been instructed to take training courses so that each employee can improve their weakness.
Reason:
- It is confirmed that the shift of workplace, seizure and inspection of computer, changed duty etc. have been proceeded under the prior approval from the Principal and the Bursar.
- It was recommended to use English for not only Donghoon Kim but also staffs and students. Also, the the staffs have been instructed to take training courses so that each employee can improve their weakness.
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