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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 11. 06 조회 10100

2020-11-06 (1)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Up to now, when I underwent endoscopies, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during endoscopies.
Up to now, when I underwent endoscopies, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during an endoscopy = during each endoscopy

I took boat rides with life vests/with a life vest, I always wore a life vest on a boat ride = on each boat ride

When I told you that it have been one week since the committee meeting, but I didn't get any notice from JEINS, you said to me, "Usually bureaucracies move slowly." May the word, bureaucracy be used for an private company?
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Up to now, when I underwent endoscopies, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during endoscopies.
Up to now, when I underwent endoscopies, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during an endoscopy = during each endoscopy

I took boat rides with life vests/with a life vest, I always wore a life vest on a boat ride = on each boat ride

When I told you that it have been one week since the committee meeting, but I didn't get any notice from JEINS, you said to me, "Usually bureaucracies move slowly." May the word, bureaucracy be used for an private company? *****

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