2020-11-06 (1)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Up to now, when I underwent endoscopies, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during endoscopies.
Up to now, when I underwent endoscopies, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during an endoscopy = during each endoscopy
I took boat rides with life vests/with a life vest, I always wore a life vest on a boat ride = on each boat ride
When I told you that it have been one week since the committee meeting, but I didn't get any notice from JEINS, you said to me, "Usually bureaucracies move slowly." May the word, bureaucracy be used for an private company?
Up to now, when I underwent endoscopies, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during an endoscopy = during each endoscopy
I took boat rides with life vests/with a life vest, I always wore a life vest on a boat ride = on each boat ride
When I told you that it have been one week since the committee meeting, but I didn't get any notice from JEINS, you said to me, "Usually bureaucracies move slowly." May the word, bureaucracy be used for an private company?
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