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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 11. 06 조회 10270

2020-11-06 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Within 20 days from the day I received a written decision from JEINS, I may file another complaint with it/them against the IT Director and IT Manager

JEINS works as they are convenient. The most convenient way to them is being a pawn/a pushover of the foreign schools. JEINS is a pawn/a pushover of the foreign schools

The civil servant is watching what JEINS and I are doing. He reads the documents that we are making. On the second paperwork, I don't appeal to JEINS. I am writing things considering the civil servant will read them.
튜터 교정 답변

Within 20 days from the day I received a written decision from JEINS, I may file another complaint with it/them against the IT Director and IT Manager

JEINS works as they are convenient. The most convenient way to them is being a pawn/a pushover of the foreign schools. JEINS is a pawn/a pushover of the foreign schools

The civil servant is watching what JEINS and I are doing. He reads the documents that we are making. On the second paperwork, I don't appeal to JEINS. I am writing things considering the civil servant will read them.*****

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