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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 11. 09 조회 10375

2020-11-09

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
JEINS works as they are convenient. The most convenient way to them is being a pawn/a pushover of the foreign schools. JEINS is a pawn/a pushover of the foreign schools.

The civil servant is watching what JEINS and I are doing. He reads the documents that we are submitting. I am preparing the second paperwork, in order to appeal to him rather than appealing to JEINS. However, my lawyer told me that the government only checks whether an employer followed a proper procedure when it dealt with its employee.
튜터 교정 답변

JEINS works as they are convenient. The most convenient way to them is being a pawn/a pushover of the foreign schools. JEINS is a pawn/a pushover of the foreign schools.

The civil servant is watching what JEINS and I are doing. He reads the documents that we are submitting. I am preparing the second paperwork, in order to appeal to him rather than appealing to JEINS. However, my lawyer told me that the government only checks whether an employer followed a proper procedure when it dealt with its employee.    *****

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