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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 11. 12 조회 10120

2020-11-12

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Neal has the allergy at this time of year.

The school told you that it/they wanted you to be in that place.

Did you contact her concerning chair arrangement/seating arrangement?
Did you ask her to arrange chairs/seatings?

Nowadays most S. Korean employees in the school are wearing a vest from the JEINS labor union. On the vest, there is a slogan, "We fight against inequality." While I was talking with a HR member who was wearing the vest. A foreign staff joined our converstion, then I said to him "Why aren't you wearing the vest that she is wearing?"

Are/Is your sales good?
튜터 교정 답변

Neal has the allergy at this time of year.

The school told you that it/they wanted you to be in that place.

Did you contact her concerning chair arrangement/seating arrangement?
Did you ask her to arrange chairs/seatings?

Nowadays most S. Korean employees in the school are wearing a vest from the JEINS labor union. On the vest, there is a slogan, "We fight against inequality." While I was talking with a HR member who was wearing the vest. A foreign staff joined our converstion, then I said to him "Why aren't you wearing the vest that she is wearing?"

Are/Is your sales good?   ******

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