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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 11. 18 조회 10935

News Paper2

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Heni1
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I usually read newspapers roughly. It is because I read the newspaper in the morning, and I don't have much time in the morning.
Regarding my routine of reading news paper is very simple.
At first, I read the first page of the newspaper carefully. Next, turn over all the pages and look at the big titles.
Finally, I look for the economic section and read it carefully again. Sometimes I read today's fortune for fun.
튜터 교정 답변

I usually read newspapers roughly. It is because I read the newspaper in the morning, and I don't have much time in the morning.
Regarding my routine of reading news paper is very simple.
At first, I read the first page of the newspaper carefully. Next, turn over all the pages and look at the big titles.
Finally, I look for the economic section and read it carefully again. Sometimes I read today's fortune for fun.

Correction:

 

I usually read the newspaper quickly (cursorily) because I don't have much time n the morning.

My routine for reading the newspaper is very simple.I read the frst page carefully. Then I look at the headlines on the other pages.

Finally, I look for the business section, and read it carefully.

Lastly, sometimes I read my horoscope for fun.

 

 

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