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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 11. 19 조회 10153

News paper3

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Heni1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I became interested in reading a newsparer when I was in university.
At that time, I used to read the news paper that was provided whenever I got a break in the library.
It was because I need to be good at common sense and trend in order to prepare for job interviw.
It was really crucial, you know.
Now, I read news paper in my office every morning, but it is my own, not common use.
튜터 교정 답변

I became interested in reading a newsparer when I was in university.
At that time, I used to read the news paper that was provided whenever I got a break in the library.
It was because I need to be good at common sense and trend in order to prepare for job interviw.
It was really crucial, you know.
Now, I read news paper in my office every morning, but it is my own, not common use.

 

Correction:

 

I became interested in reading newspapers when I was a university student.

At that time, I used to read the newspaper they offered us whenever I had a break.

It was because I wanted to be well informed  about a variety of subjects and common trends in order to be prepared for a potential job interview.

That was really important for me then.

These days I still read the newspaper in my office every morning, but I buy it for myself

 

 

 

 

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