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2020-11-25

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I crossed out the words, "Plan A"

This is the first year that JEINS provides only four education courses for language study

Once I log into/in the online education website, I see a table that shows my class schedule for December. The table looks like a calendar. In order to see your answers, I have to click a link which leads to my schedule table for November

There is a teacher who always asks me to play music before she begins her presentation. she usually includes links to Youtube music in her slides, but today she didn't. Therefore, I asked her, "Don't have music/a music to play today?"
튜터 교정 답변

I crossed out the words, "Plan A"

This is the first year that JEINS provides only four education courses for language study

Once I log into/in the online education website, I see a table that shows my class schedule for December. The table looks like a calendar. In order to see your answers, I have to click a link which leads to my schedule table for November

There is a teacher who always asks me to play music before she begins her presentation. she usually includes links to Youtube music in her slides, but today she didn't. Therefore, I asked her, "Don't have music/a music to play today?"   ****

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