2020-11-30 (1)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear Neal,
In the class today, I will read the emails that I sent and received to and from the Bursar since this Saturday. Because the idiotic IT Director locked my school email account after I met him this Friday, I sent the Bursar an email. The email is so long, so I couldn't paste it here. The Bursar delivered me the IT Director's excuse for my email, but I proved he lied. I informed the Ministry of Labor and JEINS of these facts later. Please let me read the emails right after our class today begins, but I swear It will be really really interesting. :)
KIM Dong-hoon
In the class today, I will read the emails that I sent and received to and from the Bursar since this Saturday. Because the idiotic IT Director locked my school email account after I met him this Friday, I sent the Bursar an email. The email is so long, so I couldn't paste it here. The Bursar delivered me the IT Director's excuse for my email, but I proved he lied. I informed the Ministry of Labor and JEINS of these facts later. Please let me read the emails right after our class today begins, but I swear It will be really really interesting. :)
KIM Dong-hoon
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