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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 12. 01 조회 10074

Lunch3

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Heni1
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I really love to try new restaurant, new menu, and so on.
You know, I belive I am one of foodies.
Yesterday, I had lunch with my boss and my coworkers. I found new chinese restaurnt.
Oh my godness, they were perfect. They had good lunch set menu so that we could try over 8 dishes.
We had some dimsum, noodles and fride rice with pork.
It was rally pefect and all we were so happy.
Only one thing that I was dissatisfied with cookng time cos it is to long.
Anway, overrole.. I liked there and I will try again.
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I really love to try new restaurants, a new menu, and so on.
You know, I believe I am a "foodie."
Yesterday, I had lunch with my boss and my coworkers. I found a new Chinese restaurarnt.
Oh my goodness, it was perfect. They had a good lunch set menu so that we could try over eight dishes.
We had some dimsum, noodles and fried rice with pork.
It was really perfect and we all were so happy.
The only thing that I was dissatisfied with was the cookng time because it was too long.
Overall,.I liked it there and I will try it again.

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