Lunch3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I really love to try new restaurant, new menu, and so on.
You know, I belive I am one of foodies.
Yesterday, I had lunch with my boss and my coworkers. I found new chinese restaurnt.
Oh my godness, they were perfect. They had good lunch set menu so that we could try over 8 dishes.
We had some dimsum, noodles and fride rice with pork.
It was rally pefect and all we were so happy.
Only one thing that I was dissatisfied with cookng time cos it is to long.
Anway, overrole.. I liked there and I will try again.
You know, I belive I am one of foodies.
Yesterday, I had lunch with my boss and my coworkers. I found new chinese restaurnt.
Oh my godness, they were perfect. They had good lunch set menu so that we could try over 8 dishes.
We had some dimsum, noodles and fride rice with pork.
It was rally pefect and all we were so happy.
Only one thing that I was dissatisfied with cookng time cos it is to long.
Anway, overrole.. I liked there and I will try again.
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