i`m try to study english. ㅋㅋ

I like to go to the park vacation.

-> I like to go to the park for a vacation.

I and my son usually play a baseball and my daughter mostly rides a bake.

-> My son and I usually play baseball while my daughter likes to ride a bike.

my wife read book on a beach. the park is the perfect place for my children.

-> My wife reads book at the beach and the park is the perfect place for my children.

one of my favorite park in seoul is the han river park. because, it takes only five minutes for my house.

-> One of my favorite park in Seoul is the Han river park because, it takes only five minutes to get there from my house.

my favorite movie is Scent of a woman. i have watched twice.

-> My favorite movie is the Scent of a woman. I have watched it twice.

it is a typical hollywood drama film. drama is my favorite movie genre.

-> It is a typical hollywood drama film. Drama is my favorite movie genre.

Actually, i am a big fan of 알 파치노. he won the academy award for Scent of a woman. the best scene from scent of a woman was the tango dance scene from the movie.

-> Actually, I am a big fan of 알 파치노. He won the academy award for Scent of a woman. the best scene from the movie Scent of a woman was the tango dance.

I can't forget the day. when i went to the theater, i have seen 전지현 who is the famous actress in korea. she is the most beautiful actress and i am a big fan of her. i was very excited to meet her in the theater. i asked her to take a picture with me and after i took a picture with her i also got her autograph. she was very kindly and friendly.

-> I can't forget the day I went to the theater because I saw  전지현 who is a famous actress in Korea. She is the most beautiful actress and I am a big fan of her. I was very excited to meet her in the theater. I asked her to take a picture with me and after i took a picture with her I also got her autograph. She was very kind and friendly.

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Good morning Bryan,

Thank you for your letter again. I also like the korean actress 전지현 because she is very pretty and I like her in her drama My love from the star. 별에서 온 그대

I hope to see her in person.. ^_^

Well, as I noticed, your common mistake is the capitalization of letters. Please remember that if you are going to write a sentence it shoud begin with a capital letter. For example, "It is a typical hollywood drama film." Also, the proper nouns such as name of a person and name of the place should begin in capital letter as well. Example, Seoul and Paula. Just be more careful. Have a nice day. :)