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2020-12-02 (1)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
When I saw the IT Director in the Staff Room yesterday, he was side-eyeing me. This morning he giggled looking at me while passing by me in a hallway. When I saw he giggled watching at me, I laughed loudly in spite of my self, because he behaved so childishly. He is acting like a maniac.

2020-11-30
Dear Dong-hoon
I understand this was an error on the part of the IT Dept - they blocked a number of Gmail accounts due to unsigned AUPs, however they did have yours. The account was reinstated once they realised their error.
튜터 교정 답변

When I saw the IT Director in the Staff Room yesterday, he was side-eyeing me. This morning he giggled looking at me while passing by me in a hallway. When I saw he giggled watching at me, I laughed loudly in spite of my self, because he behaved so childishly. He is acting like a maniac.

2020-11-30
Dear Dong-hoon
I understand this was an error on the part of the IT Dept - they blocked a number of Gmail accounts due to unsigned AUPs, however they did have yours. The account was reinstated once they realised their error. **

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