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2020-12-02 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
2020-11-30
Dear Bursar,
I found that the school email accounts of the support staff members who didn't submit the IT AUP paper in time, that is before 2020-11-20 Friday, were locked in the morning of 2020-02-24 Tuesday. If you want, I will show the proof.
I found that my school email account was locked around 9 PM 2020-11-27 2020-02-27 Friday right after the IT Director filmed me and told me something continuously, and I told him to wear a facial mask.
Do you think Craig's excuse makes sense?
튜터 교정 답변

2020-11-30
Dear Bursar,
I found that the school email accounts of the support staff members who didn't submit the IT AUP paper in time, that is before 2020-11-20 Friday, were locked in the morning of 2020-02-24 Tuesday. If you want, I will show the proof.
I found that my school email account was locked around 9 PM 2020-11-27 2020-02-27 Friday right after the IT Director filmed me and told me something continuously, and I told him to wear a facial mask.
Do you think Craig's excuse makes sense?  **

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