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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 12. 02 조회 10144

2020-12-02 (4)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
(Continued)
I found that my school email account was locked around 9 PM 2020-11-27 Friday right after the IT Director filmed me and told me something continuously, and I told him to wear a facial mask.
That is, Craig locked my school email account arbitrarily and intentionally without any valid reason, and then lied that he mistakenly locked it.

2020-12-02
Dear Ding-hoon
They didn't lie, I made the assumption that is what happened - this will be further investigated and you will be informed shortly.
튜터 교정 답변

(Continued)
I found that my school email account was locked around 9 PM 2020-11-27 Friday right after the IT Director filmed me and told me something continuously, and I told him to wear a facial mask.
That is, Craig locked my school email account arbitrarily and intentionally without any valid reason, and then lied that he mistakenly locked it.

2020-12-02
Dear Ding-hoon
They didn't lie, I made the assumption that is what happened - this will be further investigated and you will be informed shortly. **

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