My best friend

[CORRECTION]

My best friend is Jin Kim. We became friends because we were in the same class in middle and high school. Moreover, his house was right next to mine, so we walked to school together every day and we played after school every day. We have been friends for more than fourteen years and we are still best friends. we often meet to drink on the weekends.

[COMMENT]

Hello, Aaron! You were able to tell me about your best friend in as much detail as you can. It's good to know that you've been friends for more than 14 years. I hope that you will have a strong and lasting friendship. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made for you above. Keep it up!

Have a great evening,

-Teacher Mitch-