Self Introduction
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, I am Evan.
Well. It is always hard to introduce my self to someone.
Um, but what I most like to do thesedays is to have a time with my young son, he is just 8years old.
You know, I have tried to do what I can do with him together, what he can ejoy. I mean it includes everything, such as food, exercising, and hobby, except wine. Honestly, I am wine lover.
Any way, hopefully I want him to remember me as a good daddy in the future.
I think that is pretty much all about my self.
Well. It is always hard to introduce my self to someone.
Um, but what I most like to do thesedays is to have a time with my young son, he is just 8years old.
You know, I have tried to do what I can do with him together, what he can ejoy. I mean it includes everything, such as food, exercising, and hobby, except wine. Honestly, I am wine lover.
Any way, hopefully I want him to remember me as a good daddy in the future.
I think that is pretty much all about my self.
튜터 교정 답변
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