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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 12. 09 조회 11005

2020-12-09 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
He CC'd the Bursar. However, after reading those three, I thought it was the IT Director's responsibility to answer two questions out of the three. Therefore, I called the auditor and asked who had the responsibility to answer the two questions. Then, the auditor told me that the IT Director had. Therefore, I sent an email to the IT Director, saying what I heard from the auditor and attached my answer to question #11. I CC'd the Bursar. However, when I met the auditor last Friday, he asked me whether I also answered question #20. He showed me the answer that the IT Director sent.
튜터 교정 답변

He CC'd the Bursar. However, after reading those three, I thought it was the IT Director's responsibility to answer two questions out of the three. Therefore, I called the auditor and asked who had the responsibility to answer the two questions. Then, the auditor told me that the IT Director had. Therefore, I sent an email to the IT Director, saying what I heard from the auditor and attached my answer to question #11. I CC'd the Bursar. However, when I met the auditor last Friday, he asked me whether I also answered question #20. He showed me the answer that the IT Director sent.  **

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