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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 12. 09 조회 11091

Appointment 1,2

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Heni1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. Whenever I make an appointment, I usually check my iphone first. You know, I always have tried to recoord my important schedule on the diary apprication in my iphone. It is really conveinent because it informs me in advance when I have an important schedule. Without an iPhone, I'd probably be crazy.
2. Two weeks ago, I originally planned to have a year-end party this weekend with my corkers.
You see, a year-end party is very common, but you know it is totally different from our normal due to the covid 19. We should cancel the party by the policy of the gov as the cases is obvisouly incle.
튜터 교정 답변

1. Whenever I make an appointment, I usually check my iPhone first. You know, I always have tried to reco(o)rd my important schedule on the diary appLIcation in my iPhone. It is really convenIent because it informs me in advance when I have an important schedule. Without an iPhone, I'd probably be crazy.
2. Two weeks ago, I originally planned to have a year-end party this weekend with my coWOrkers.
You see, a year-end party is very common, but you know it is totally different from our normal due to the covid 19. We (  should)  MUST cancel the party DUE TO the policy of the gov (as the cases is obvisouly incle) since the cases are obviosly increasing..

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