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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 12. 10 조회 10640

Recycling1, 2

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Heni1
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1. I think the recycling system in Korea is efecetive. I am satisfied with our system because it is free for recycling such as plastics, bottles, and papers. You know, For regualr garbage bags, we have to pay for them. But, I feel it is not too expensive. Only one thing that I don't like regarding our recyling system is that I can recycle once a week, on a specific day. It is a little bit unconvenient. Anyway, I mostly like our recycling system. 2. In my opinon, the most important thing is to protect our nature environment. It's because we have to give clean environment to next generation.
튜터 교정 답변

1. I think the recycling system in Korea is efFec(e)tive. I am satisfied with our system because it is free for recycling such as plastics, bottles, and papers. You know, WE HAVE TO PAY FOR REGULAR garbage bags.. But, I feel it is not too expensive. THERE IS only one thing that I don't like regarding our recyling system WHICH IS that I can recycle JUST once a week, on a specific day. It is a little bit INconvenient. Anyway, I mostly like our recycling system. 2. In my opinon, the most important thing is to protect our ( nature) environment. It's because we have to give A clean environment to THE next generation.

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