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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 12. 14 조회 10071

2020-12-14

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I sent an email to him, notifying him of what I can do
I sent an email to him, notifying him what I can do
I sent an email to him, informing him of what I can do
I sent an email to him, informing him what I can do

Last week, the civil servant called me. During the call, he agreed to the following:
JEINS is very slow to do something. It has been dealing with the harassment case because he is monitoring. As soon as he leaves, JEINS will close the case, concluding there was nothing wrong
JEINS is a pawn of the school
The IT Director and the Bursar look down on Koreans
튜터 교정 답변

I sent an email to him, notifying him of what I can do
I sent an email to him, notifying him what I can do
I sent an email to him, informing him of what I can do
I sent an email to him, informing him what I can do

Last week, the civil servant called me. During the call, he agreed to the following:
JEINS is very slow to do something. It has been dealing with the harassment case because he is monitoring. As soon as he leaves, JEINS will close the case, concluding there was nothing wrong
JEINS is a pawn of the school
The IT Director and the Bursar look down on Koreans   **

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