2020-12-16 (2)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
When I got to near the summit, I couldn't see any rope railing. I wondered where they had gone. I soon found they were three to four meters below my feet. I realized I was walking on a thick snowpack. I am going to climb it again tomorrow, if the weather allows.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!