2020-12-17 (1)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
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The vice principal, Toby is very strict to staff members including teachers. One day, around the swimming pool, I found Toby was with his daughter who was about 9 to 10 years old. I entered the men's/male locker room to change my clothes. Suddenly, the girl entered the room and walked around looking for something. I was at a loss for words for a while because I couldn't believe what I was seeing. I said to her, "This is men's area." She answered, "I know." and kept walking around. She didn't care where she was.
The vice principal, Toby is very strict to staff members including teachers. One day, around the swimming pool, I found Toby was with his daughter who was about 9 to 10 years old. I entered the men's/male locker room to change my clothes. Suddenly, the girl entered the room and walked around looking for something. I was at a loss for words for a while because I couldn't believe what I was seeing. I said to her, "This is men's area." She answered, "I know." and kept walking around. She didn't care where she was.
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