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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 12. 17 조회 9745

2020-12-17 (1)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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The vice principal, Toby is very strict to staff members including teachers. One day, around the swimming pool, I found Toby was with his daughter who was about 9 to 10 years old. I entered the men's/male locker room to change my clothes. Suddenly, the girl entered the room and walked around looking for something. I was at a loss for words for a while because I couldn't believe what I was seeing. I said to her, "This is men's area." She answered, "I know." and kept walking around. She didn't care where she was.
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I haven't received a/any reply from him.

The vice principal, Toby is very strict to staff members including teachers. One day, around the swimming pool, I found Toby was with his daughter who was about 9 to 10 years old. I entered the men's/male locker room to change my clothes. Suddenly, the girl entered the room and walked around looking for something. I was at a loss for words for a while because I couldn't believe what I was seeing. I said to her, "This is men's area." She answered, "I know." and kept walking around. She didn't care where she was.   **

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