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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 12. 22 조회 10477

2020-12-22 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I knew my head was colliding with the road. However, I was wearing a helmet. After the impact passed away, I felt I was OK, but at the same time I thought that if I had not worn the helmet, I would have died there. I immediately stood up, and found that there was no broken part in my body. I moved my bike to the roadside. I murmured to myself, "Never jump again." Soon I felt a severe pain on my right elbow. I found that the right side of my helmet was broken into two pieces. I thought I was really fortunate. I rode my bike a few more hours.
튜터 교정 답변

I knew my head was colliding with the road. However, I was wearing a helmet. After the impact passed away, I felt I was OK, but at the same time I thought that if I had not worn the helmet, I would have died there. I immediately stood up, and found that there was no broken part in my body. I moved my bike to the roadside. I murmured to myself, "Never jump again." Soon I felt a severe pain on my right elbow. I found that the right side of my helmet was broken into two pieces. I thought I was really fortunate. I rode my bike a few more hours. **

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