Have a good day~ ^^
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I like going camping.
I have purchased tents and copel and other equipments necessary for the camping last year.
I only could go for a camping once due to the office workload I have.
I feel guilty for my children for this, so I have decided to go for a camping at least twice this year.
I have a very close friend named 손 춘 식~.
We have been friends since elementary school called 봉천 at 6 grades.
He has short curly hair and he uses South dialects.
He has not humorous nor talkative to be looked attractive enough.
so, ha has not been married yet.
well, let me know if you have the right girl for me.
I have purchased tents and copel and other equipments necessary for the camping last year.
I only could go for a camping once due to the office workload I have.
I feel guilty for my children for this, so I have decided to go for a camping at least twice this year.
I have a very close friend named 손 춘 식~.
We have been friends since elementary school called 봉천 at 6 grades.
He has short curly hair and he uses South dialects.
He has not humorous nor talkative to be looked attractive enough.
so, ha has not been married yet.
well, let me know if you have the right girl for me.
튜터 교정 답변
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