2021-01-06 (1)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Whenever I got near the summit, I saw rope railings along the trail.
Your words leaves room/a room for misunderstanding.
One day, I found that some of my access to doors were deleted. I asked the employee who was in charge whether she deleted them. She answered that she deleted them at the IT Manager's demand. When she was asked by me, she realized she shouldn't have done what he demanded, She restored my access. To leave a record, I sent an email to her, asking the same question, but she didn't reply.
Your words leaves room/a room for misunderstanding.
One day, I found that some of my access to doors were deleted. I asked the employee who was in charge whether she deleted them. She answered that she deleted them at the IT Manager's demand. When she was asked by me, she realized she shouldn't have done what he demanded, She restored my access. To leave a record, I sent an email to her, asking the same question, but she didn't reply.
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