2021-01-07 (1)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
In/On the organization chart, I am a member of the IT Dept.
I needed (each requestor's ID card/each ID card of the requestors) to register theirs in the printer system.
I needed each ID card of them.
I needed (each requestor's email ID/each email ID of the requestors) to add theirs to the relevant e-mail groups.
I needed each email ID of them.
I needed (each requestor's security credentials/each security credentials of the requestors) to modify their access to doors.
I needed each credentials of them.
I needed (each requestor's ID card/each ID card of the requestors) to register theirs in the printer system.
I needed each ID card of them.
I needed (each requestor's email ID/each email ID of the requestors) to add theirs to the relevant e-mail groups.
I needed each email ID of them.
I needed (each requestor's security credentials/each security credentials of the requestors) to modify their access to doors.
I needed each credentials of them.
튜터 교정 답변
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