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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 01. 08 조회 9852

2020-01-08 (1)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I needed the ID card of each requestor, in order to register it in the printer system
I needed each of the requestor's ID cards, in order to..
I needed each requestor's ID card, in order to ..

I needed the email ID of each requestor.
I needed each of the requestor's email IDs.
I needed each requestor's email ID.

I received an email notifying that I was on/in the list of candidates for promotion. When I read it, I didn't expect that I would be promoted, because this is my third year since I joined JEINS.
튜터 교정 답변

I needed the ID card of each requestor, in order to register it in the printer system
I needed each of the requestor's ID cards, in order to..
I needed each requestor's ID card, in order to ..

I needed the email ID of each requestor.
I needed each of the requestor's email IDs.
I needed each requestor's email ID.

I received an email notifying that I was on/in the list of candidates for promotion. When I read it, I didn't expect that I would be promoted, because this is my third year since I joined JEINS. **

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