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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 01. 12 조회 10179

2021-01-12 (1)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
When I managed the security system, I didn't need each person's ID card to modify their access to doors. I think it still works that way/in that way.

I got feedback/a feedback from him.
I got feedback/feedbacks from the staff, students, and parents.

I submitted my 2nd complaint to JEINS on November 20, 2020. According to the rules, JEINS should have made a decision about it by January 6, 2021. On January 7, I sent an email to JEINS, notifying it that the deadline expired. I also asked it what was the decision. JEINS didn't reply. I sent the same email again on January 11.
튜터 교정 답변

When I managed the security system, I didn't need each person's ID card to modify their access to doors. I think it still works that way/in that way.

I got feedback/a feedback from him.
I got feedback/feedbacks from the staff, students, and parents.

I submitted my 2nd complaint to JEINS on November 20, 2020. According to the rules, JEINS should have made a decision about it by January 6, 2021. On January 7, I sent an email to JEINS, notifying it that the deadline expired. I also asked it what was the decision. JEINS didn't reply. I sent the same email again on January 11.**

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