Staying at home during vacations
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I like staying home during vacations instead of traveling. Since it saves money and it’s relaxing. I usually want to sleep in but I have a habit that I wake up at 7am. My eyes open that time automatically. Because I always need to have a breakfast. The reason why I always do it is my mom. When I was a kid, she always said, “Wake up. It is the time you have breakfast. If you are tired, sleep again after eating something.” But, I woke up perfectly after having a breakfast. Maybe it was a her trick. Anyway, I catch up on my reading and my piled up housework during at home. Sometimes, I make plans with my friends and we meet at the neighborhood bar and drink some alcohol. I like those times because it is fun and not stressful. And I like going theater alone in the morning. I can watch movie with cheap price in the morning. Many of my friends think that they have to go out on their weekend. However, I don’t have obsession like them. I really like staying at home during my vacations.
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