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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 01. 21 조회 11145

2021-01-21 (1)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
HR finally sent an email to the employees and the Bursar, concerning the online learning from September 2020 to August 2021. According to the email, an employee may have up to six courses per year. It noted, "The limit of each lesson will be from KRW 80,000 to 100,000." After reading it, I visited the website and saw which course I could take with that money. I found that I could take only two ten-mintue classes per week for a month. I replied to HR and the Bursar, "I understand that there has to be a budget limit for this.
튜터 교정 답변

HR finally sent an email to the employees and the Bursar, concerning the online learning from September 2020 to August 2021. According to the email, an employee may have up to six courses per year. It noted, "The limit of each lesson will be from KRW 80,000 to 100,000." After reading it, I visited the website and saw which course I could take with that money. I found that I could take only two ten-mintue classes per week for a month. I replied to HR and the Bursar, "I understand that there has to be a budget limit for this. **

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