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2021-01-22 (1)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
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According to the email from HR, an employee may take up to six courses per year. It noted, "The limit of each lesson will be from KRW 80,000 to 100,000." HR made a mistake when writing: it should have written 'each course' instead of 'each lesson'. After reading the email, I visited the online learning website and saw which English phone courses cost 80 to 100K. FYR, one phone English course lasts one month. I could find the courses, which cost 75K, provide only two ten-mintue classes per week.
From here on, I will read the sentences which you corrected yesterday.
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According to the email from HR, an employee may take up to six courses per year. It noted, "The limit of each lesson will be from KRW 80,000 to 100,000." HR made a mistake when writing: it should have written 'each course' instead of 'each lesson'. After reading the email, I visited the online learning website and saw which English phone courses cost 80 to 100K. FYR, one phone English course lasts one month. I could find the courses, which cost 75K, provide only two ten-mintue classes per week.
From here on, I will read the sentences which you corrected yesterday. **

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