2021-01-27 (1)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
If I took the course, would you pay it?/pay for it?
Under the COVID-19 pandemic, some countries decreased the number of their infected people by decreasing the number of infection test on their people. They intentionally did it because media daily announced each country's patient number. They wanted to avoid blame, but their improper action brought them a backlash. The number of infected people drastically increased, because they didn't properly test people, However, the S. Korea government thought that thoroughly testing its people was more important than avoiding blame.
Under the COVID-19 pandemic, some countries decreased the number of their infected people by decreasing the number of infection test on their people. They intentionally did it because media daily announced each country's patient number. They wanted to avoid blame, but their improper action brought them a backlash. The number of infected people drastically increased, because they didn't properly test people, However, the S. Korea government thought that thoroughly testing its people was more important than avoiding blame.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!