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2021-01-27 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
In the early stage of the pandemic, the number of infected people in S. Korea was much higher than those of other countries, because S. Korea thoroughly performed tests. However, the ignorant media and people daily blamed the government, saying that it was incapable. The government didn't compromise, and has been very successful at keeping the virus from spreading. Knowing what is right and doing what is right are different things. I am very happy with the wise and brave government.
튜터 교정 답변

In the early stage of the pandemic, the number of infected people in S. Korea was much higher than those of other countries, because S. Korea thoroughly performed tests. However, the ignorant media and people daily blamed the government, saying that it was incapable. The government didn't compromise, and has been very successful at keeping the virus from spreading. Knowing what is right and doing what is right are different things. I am very happy with the wise and brave government.**

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