it's shine day~

My favorite sports starts Michael Jordan.

-> My favorite player is Michael Jordan.

he is a Olympic champion and president of basketball.

->He is an Olympic champion and the president of basketball.

Michael Jordan led the Chicago Bulls to six national champions of basketball. also. he was famous for his slam dunks and it is one of the reasons why Michael Jordan became great.

-> Michael Jordan led the Chicago Bulls to six national champions of basketball. Also, he was famous for his slam dunks and it is one of the reasons why Michael Jordan became great.

Yet, he is the greatest player in basketball history first and last.

-> He is the greatest player in basketball history.

 I play basketball with my friends from high school. All of us are pretty good at basketball, so we sometimes have a game with another team.

->I play basketball with my friends from high school. All of us are pretty good at basketball, so sometimes we play a game with another team.

We usually go to a court near the Han River to play basketball. I like listening to many kinds of music, but i think ballad music is the best. my favorite singer is Mariah Carey. I really like one of his songs, 'Without You' because it is very beautiful. Well.suddenly i just feel good. Let me sing a song to you ~

-> We usually go to a court near the Han River to play basketball. I like listening to many kinds of music, but i think ballad music is the best. My favorite singer is Mariah Carey. I really like one of her songs, 'Without You' because it is very beautiful. Well, suddenly I just feel good. Let me sing a song to you.

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Hello Bryan,

Just like you, I also like playing basketball but I don't have any favorite players. It's just that I enjoy watching and playing it as well. Michael Jordan is really a good player that's why a lot of people like him. Mariah Carey is a good singer. I like her song 'Hero" and "One Sweet Day". The lyrics are good and the melody is wonderful too. If we have free time, you should sing your favorite song to me ok? Till next time. Have a  great day! :)