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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 02. 04 조회 10801

2021-02-04 (1)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Let's assume we play a rugby game. You and I belong to the same team. Our team heads toward the north. When the game begins, I stand on your right side(on the east side) on our team's line. You get the ball and start running north with it. I also start running a bit behind you, then I run northwest to be on your left side. Because I am a bit behind you, I am going to shout to you to pass me the ball. Also, I want to let you know that you need to pass the ball to the left.
튜터 교정 답변

Let's assume we play a rugby game. You and I belong to the same team. Our team heads toward the north. When the game begins, I stand on your right side(on the east side) on our team's line. You get the ball and start running north with it. I also start running a bit behind you, then I run northwest to be on your left side. Because I am a bit behind you, I am going to shout to you to pass me the ball. Also, I want to let you know that you need to pass the ball to the left. **

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