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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 02. 10 조회 10059

2021-02-10

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
on a scale of one to ten, what will you rate her performance?

You need to keep a fire at a distance.
It is better to keep colleagues at a distance.

I saw the volleyball players, but there was a distance between us. I could see them far from them.
튜터 교정 답변

on a scale of one to ten, what will you rate her performance?

You need to keep a fire at a distance.
It is better to keep colleagues at a distance.

I saw the volleyball players, but there was a distance between us. I could see them far from them.  **

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