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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 02. 15 조회 9701

2021-02-15

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
A Big Mac Combo Meal/Meals consists of French fries, a cup of coke, and a Big Mac

I recommended to them that they become civil servants/a civil servant

Because I rode my bicycle outside, my face was tanned

Every July, many teachers leave the school/depart the school

Jeju is located below the southwest part of the mainland. I've heard that when it was so mild, we could see the southwest part of the mainland from the north part of Jeju. However, I couldn't see it while I lived in the Jeju city, which is in the north part, for four years
튜터 교정 답변

A Big Mac Combo Meal/Meals consists of French fries, a cup of coke, and a Big Mac

I recommended to them that they become civil servants/a civil servant

Because I rode my bicycle outside, my face was tanned

Every July, many teachers leave the school/depart the school

Jeju is located below the southwest part of the mainland. I've heard that when it was so mild, we could see the southwest part of the mainland from the north ** part of Jeju. However, I couldn't see it while I lived in the Jeju city, which is in the north part, for four years

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