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2021-02-17 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I was impressed by his advice. I asked the teacher, "Is that your own idea or did you learn it from someone?"

Concerning the class we had yesterday, please refer to the following sentences that we discussed before.
(1) People who lost their ID card visit me and ask for a new one.
(2) Some students have an asterisk mark after their surname.
(3) I recommended to them that they become civil servants.
(4) When on earth students will receive their ID cards?
(5) Tell your students to register their ID cards for printing.
튜터 교정 답변

I was impressed by his advice. I asked the teacher, "Is that your own idea or did you learn it from someone?"

Concerning the class we had yesterday, please refer to the following sentences that we discussed before.
(1) People who lost their ID card visit me and ask for a new one.
(2) Some students have an asterisk mark after their surname.
(3) I recommended to them that they become civil servants.
(4) When on earth students will receive their ID cards?
(5) Tell your students to register their ID cards for printing. **

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