Lesson1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
First of all, The benefits of GMO to human is increasing the quantity of the food. Now, the human population is rapidly increased. Actually, food is getting short of. GMO can help the problem. Another benefit is nothing.
In my opinion, The losses of The GMO food is not good for health. When the GMO Crops are caltivated, a huge amount of camical into it. It affects to human’s health deadly. In addition, we don’t have lots of information about it. And it destroyes ecosystem. It’s not natural process for harvesting.
And Lesson2. I dont have an experience about any Circus
Thanks Vanessa
In my opinion, The losses of The GMO food is not good for health. When the GMO Crops are caltivated, a huge amount of camical into it. It affects to human’s health deadly. In addition, we don’t have lots of information about it. And it destroyes ecosystem. It’s not natural process for harvesting.
And Lesson2. I dont have an experience about any Circus
Thanks Vanessa
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