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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 03. 17 조회 10024

lesson 4

작성자: mollang11 담당 튜터: Cristina
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. Do you ever get the feeling that spring comes? As last winter was highly cold, this spring is very valued. When I occasionally walk home from office, I feel getting warm.

2. I am getting to speak English well. But some word or stences are still on my tongue. I try to correct conversation and expext to develop my English ability with Crisina's assistance!
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1. Do you ever get the feeling that spring comes? As last winter was highly cold, this spring is very valued. When I occasionally walk home from office, I feel getting warm.

Correction:

Do you ever get the feeling that spring comes? As last winter was highly cold, this spring is very valued. When I occasionally walk home from the office, I feel getting warm.

2. I am getting to speak English well. But some word or stences are still on my tongue. I try to correct conversation and expext to develop my English ability with Crisina's assistance!

Correction:

I am getting to speak English well. But some words or sentences are still on my tongue. I try to correct the conversation and expect to develop my English ability with Cristina's assistance!

 

Hi Mr. Kim Minhyeong,

Glad to send your writing composition tonight. Please check out my corrections on some of your misspelled and missing words. I am willing to assist you in your English improvement. Talk a lot about any topic you want to discuss that will help you built more vocabulary.

T. Cristina

 

 

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