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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 04. 15 조회 9946

All roads lead to Rome

작성자: khj0307 담당 튜터: Carrie
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Durng the last call, we talked about my city's promotion slogan; always Incheon. This is referenced from the proverb "All roads lead to Rome". My city has emphasized the geographical merits which Incheon is located next to the capitol, Seoul and known for the tranportaion hub due to the international airport, seaport and tranport of subway, railway, bus terminal and so on. Therefore, we can say that all ways lead to Incheon and your place is always Incheon to live, work and visit or tour.
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During the last call, we talked about my city's promotion slogan; Always Incheon. This is referenced from the proverb "All roads lead to Rome". My city has emphasized the geographical merits where Incheon is located next to the capitol, Seoul. Known for the tranportion hub due to the international airport, seaport and tranport of subway, railway, bus terminal and so on. Therefore, we can say that all ways lead to Incheon and your place is always Incheon to live, work and visit or tour.

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This is well done! You just need to be careful with the spelling of some words. I made a very few corrections. 

Have a wonderful weekend! 

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