I feel depressed, but..
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You know that we're having the world cup season these days.
I watched the soccer game between Korea and Algeria in the early morining.
The Korean team was beaten too easily in the second round of the world cup.
The Korean soccer players lost the game
because they were under a great deal of their opponents's pressure from mid-field.
I think they should seek for solutions to overcone that situation until next game.
However, we are still in with a chance and it is not over yet.
Like most Koreans,
I'm looking forward to pull a surprise victory over the Belgian team on 27 June.
Good Luck to Korean team.
I watched the soccer game between Korea and Algeria in the early morining.
The Korean team was beaten too easily in the second round of the world cup.
The Korean soccer players lost the game
because they were under a great deal of their opponents's pressure from mid-field.
I think they should seek for solutions to overcone that situation until next game.
However, we are still in with a chance and it is not over yet.
Like most Koreans,
I'm looking forward to pull a surprise victory over the Belgian team on 27 June.
Good Luck to Korean team.
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