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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 04. 16 조회 10000

2021-04-16

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I work in an international school in Jeju.
I work at an international school in Jeju.
I work for an international school in Jeju.

In order for you to pick up your ID card when I am not in the room, I will leave your card on the small window of the door.

Seoul had a local referendum on/about whether it would provide free school lunches to all students.

The result of the referendum was opposed to the mayor's plan.

The allegation that he was involved in/with some real estate speculation/speculations was proved by many witnesses and proofs.

He was with some of his wife's family members.
튜터 교정 답변

I work in an international school in Jeju.
I work at an international school in Jeju.
I work for an international school in Jeju.

In order for you to pick up your ID card when I am not in the room, I will leave your card on the small window of the door.

Seoul had a local referendum on/about whether it would provide free school lunches to all students.

The result of the referendum was opposed to the mayor's plan.

The allegation that he was involved in/with some real estate speculation/speculations was proved by many witnesses and proofs.

He was with some of his wife's family members. **

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