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2021-04-26 (2)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
In S. Korea, Seoul is the hub of economy, education, culture, and etc.

A teacher asked me whether he would be allowed to live in a house that annually costs more than KRW 12M.
A teacher asked me whether he will be allowed to live in a house that annually costs more than KRW 12M.
A teacher asked me whether he may live in a house that annually costs more than KRW 12M.

In the house, there are possessions abandoned by the family who lived there.
튜터 교정 답변

In S. Korea, Seoul is the hub of economy, education, culture, and etc.

A teacher asked me whether he would be allowed to live in a house that annually costs more than KRW 12M.
A teacher asked me whether he will be allowed to live in a house that annually costs more than KRW 12M.
A teacher asked me whether he may live in a house that annually costs more than KRW 12M.

In the house, there are possessions abandoned by the family who lived there.  **

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