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공개 첨삭 완료 2021. 04. 27 조회 10275

2021-04-27 (3)

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Period: 2021.06.25-2022.07.01
* The rent is based on the current market price.
* The lease period is about one year and two weeks because of the staff housing policy.
* Registering leasehold rights, etc. will incur an additional cost.

B. Rationale: Neal wants to live off-site.

Attachment:
1. Lease contract and relevant documents
2. Staff housing policy. END.
튜터 교정 답변

Period: 2021.06.25-2022.07.01
* The rent is based on the current market price.
* The lease period is about one year and two weeks because of the staff housing policy.
* Registering leasehold rights, etc. will incur an additional cost.

B. Rationale: Neal wants to live off-site.

Attachment:
1. Lease contract and relevant documents **
2. Staff housing policy. END.

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